Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
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Thursday, May 14, 2020
Term 2 Week 5 - Writing
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Hi Natalie
ReplyDeleteYou have put so much effort into your report on Mary. It is very detailed but the language used is clear and easy to follow, well done. Did you learn anything about Mary that you were not previously aware of? It's hard to compare living now to in Mary's time but I would hope that I would act with a lot of the compassion that Mary had as well.
Katrina